Hi folks,
Today’s edition is all about something most law schools never teach you properly:
How to redline and comment on a contract like a lawyer.
This skill can literally set you apart in internships, training contracts, and early job roles.
You’ll come across smarter, more prepared, and way more useful on any deal.
Let’s break it down 👇
What is Redlining?
Redlining is just a fancy word for editing a contract with visible tracked changes, so both sides can see what’s being added, deleted, or commented on.
Think of it like:
Additions = in blue or underlined
Deletions = in red or struck out
Comments = your reasoning or questions in the margin
It’s how contract negotiation actually happens.
Not in WhatsApp groups.
Not on phone calls.
But inside the document itself.
Common Rookie Mistakes
Deleting without explaining.
You can't just strike out a whole clause and walk away. Always leave a comment:
“Client may push back on unlimited liability. Suggest capping at fees paid.”Overusing legalese in comments.
Keep it human. Write comments that actually help your team or client make decisions:
“Do we really need this termination clause if there’s a 30-day notice anyway?”Not checking definitions.
If you edit a term like “Confidential Information,” make sure it's not defined somewhere else in the document. That’s how small edits break contracts.Making it personal.
Never comment like this:
“This clause is nonsense.”
Instead say:
“Consider rephrasing, could be interpreted too broadly.”
Tools You Should Know
Microsoft Word’s Track Changes: Your bread and butter.
Learn to toggle “All Markup,” add comments, and accept/reject changes.
Draftable: For side-by-side comparisons of two versions of a contract.
Loio or Lexis Create: AI tools that flag redline risks, good for later, but first learn to do it manually.
Let’s say you’re reviewing this clause from a freelance agreement:
“The Freelancer shall transfer all intellectual property rights in the Work to the Client upon completion.”
Here’s a simple redline + comment:
Redlined Clause:
“The Freelancer shall transfer all intellectual property rights in the Work to the Client upon final payment.”
Comment:
“Shift transfer to after payment to protect Freelancer from not getting paid.”
This is what makes your work valuable:
You’re not just editing grammar, you’re spotting risk and suggesting strategy.
What do you think?
See you next Friday,
Lipi